Thank you so much for pointing out the mistake I have made, you are right abusolutely. I have to check what I have written carefully afterwards, otherwise I will be in trouble, hehe.
It is nice to know you. I cann't image you are from the place you posted. You are a 美玉， and it will 生香 when you write a peom. 香 will make a contribution in changing current atmosphere in China.
I am not curious anymore about what kinds of school you have graduated, because I know for sure that you are not a elementary student, not just from the peoms you have posted here, also from your face, your feeling , your eyes and your temperament.
I loved to read poems when I was young, and also would like to write some poems, but never could write something, I felt that I am not the person who could do it, and gave up. Even I accepted that writing peoms is your hobby, but it is not easy to reach this level unless you are genius in writing. I really don't think you only have a diploma from elementary school, but anyway I enjoy in reading what you have writen. By the way, you are also a very pretty young lady, it make your peoms more popular. Thanks.
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美玉才情,使人读之情欲皆忘,真想一睹其真人风采,看看是何等神仙妹妹!
2007-12-12 20:20:32
大有黛玉遗风
2007-09-14 13:32:44
沂蒙汲子青衫湿
2007-09-06 22:57:39
读后悲伤
2007-09-03 16:08:34
Thank you so much for pointing out the mistake I have made, you are right abusolutely. I have to check what I have written carefully afterwards, otherwise I will be in trouble, hehe.
It is nice to know you. I cann't image you are from the place you posted. You are a 美玉， and it will 生香 when you write a peom. 香 will make a contribution in changing current atmosphere in China.
I am not curious anymore about what kinds of school you have graduated, because I know for sure that you are not a elementary student, not just from the peoms you have posted here, also from your face, your feeling , your eyes and your temperament.
Have a nice weekend! bye.
2007-09-01 10:18:14
I think the sentence shoulde be "it makes your peoms more popular" .Am I right? but, your grammar is super in fact .,realy. Please forgive me .
2007-09-01 08:03:45
Hehe.You are realy a curious guy! Thanks for your praise. Glad to meet you!
2007-09-01 07:45:07
I loved to read poems when I was young, and also would like to write some poems, but never could write something, I felt that I am not the person who could do it, and gave up. Even I accepted that writing peoms is your hobby, but it is not easy to reach this level unless you are genius in writing. I really don't think you only have a diploma from elementary school, but anyway I enjoy in reading what you have writen. By the way, you are also a very pretty young lady, it make your peoms more popular. Thanks.
2007-09-01 01:52:40
八年别离只偶飞，
千里孤坟浓相思，
鲲鹏双双默祈愿，
他日定将清明辉。
2007-08-29 12:38:00
古诗新曲家祭，坟影泪眼迷离，月移烟绕，秋凉烧纸添衣。
2007-08-29 11:10:06